baronjohn said:
Vault Dweller said:
"Apparently everyone seems to agree that a Blight is the perfect time to start killing each other. Marvelous, really."
Well written (disagree? do your own version of this sentence), witty observation that comments on the situation and fits the golem's personality and overall indifference.
Why would that be considered well-written or witty? Seriously. I know Bioshit tried to make a character who's wise and cynical to the ways of the world (very original), but all they created was a subnormal douchebag. This is because Bioware writers are subnormal douchebags, presumably.
"And how do you know they are right? Their faith would make you swallow a great deal for small comfort."
I really like this line. A lot is packed into the second sentence. It's always a challenge to say more with less (I loved the Snatch's dialogue lines), and this line does it almost brilliantly.
This is just a bland anti-religious line. Why is this even here? It's a deadly violation of etiquette to question someone's religion, and you're not going to be successful in turning anyone away from what they believe. That's why it's not done in real life or well-written fiction.
In good fiction a character who questioned the leader's religion would be executed on the spot and fed to the dogs. Only in a shitty video game could have you a discussion like that ends with "Hmm. You may be right." after questioning your superior's beliefs.
You might be better off playing the game for longer than 30 minutes before making comments that reveal your own ignorance.
Just for your own info, the character who is "questioning" the PC's religion isn't a party member. He's an incredibly powerful, very old mage in the Wardens who, if anything, would outrank
your character.
Fun fact! That's not the
only way you're wrong. The character is just pointing out that what the NPC said goes against what the Chantry claims,
not that your character necessarily believes that, or follows the religion the Chantry preaches.
God, DA's writing sucks because it isn't realistic in this
completely made up scenario I invented in my own brain because I never actually saw this part of the game.
I'm not going to even bother discussing your inaccurate description of Shale (a golem, not that you knew that), since I'm 100% certain you didn't get anywhere near far enough in the game to recruit him.