The author of this article can't write for shit. His English is worse than a primary schooler. He doesn't know JA2. And this is also very poor editorial work on behalf of felipepepe. Lots of the cRPG book articles are of this low standard, btw. And yet, the Codex holds it up as something not shit?
You know, if you gonna shit talk me, might at least have the courtesy to tag me.
I do appreciate criticism of the book, but all you did was point out grammar mistakes and say that Shanga - the guy who's been adm of the biggest JA2 fansite out there for 17 years - doesn't know JA2.
Good criticism would've have pointed out that the article focus too much on the experience, without explaining the underneath mechanics like stances, aiming, action points, mercenary creation, etc. Which BTW, you're also partially guilty of: you tell readers to reserve their AP, but nowhere did you explain how AP, stances and aiming your shots work.
It's too easy to assume readers know what you're talking about, especially when you're extremely familiar with a game. The JA2 was one of the first reviews I got, back in 2014 - I've learned a lot in the past years and now I take care that every review should explain the basic gameplay to those who never heard of it before. Still need to update a few older ones like this one, but I'll get there. Grammar is the smallest of issues here, I'm kinda disappointed you wasted all your time on them.